Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 3 (13/20)

• Planning and research evidence will be complete;•  There is proficient research into similar products and a potential target audience;•  There is proficient organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;• There is proficient work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding; • There is a good level of care in the presentation of the research and planning

6• Time management is good.

Interim grade: Level 3: 13/20 Level

Medal:

1. Jordan, your blog has improved a lot over the last few weeks. You have made a number of very good posts of a good standard.
2. Good work on your storyboards - could possibly add some more archive images to build a picture of the whole plot
3. Good synopis and your spelling has improved a lot
4. Watch the diamante spelling throughout
5. DS Studio logo could do with some improvements, to make it more visually appealing
6. Excellent script and ideas in evidence
7. You have improved your textual anakysis as well

Mission: To get a level 4:

1. Evidence of the BFI audience research required asap
2. Evidence of images from the set, of costumes, location reeces, images/video of the making/behind the scenes
3. Possibly some more 'fleshed out' mind mapping of initail ideas, Task 3
4. Comb through your posts and make sure you can add more details throughout

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	13
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A